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New page!
Because I had time and didn't want to work on homework! :dummy:


I am so very unsatisfied with how this one came out... panel 1 is riddled with anatomy and perspective mistakes, panel 3 does not read the way I wanted it to, and the shading overall is iffy.



Plus, I still ink like a wimp :C

I want to ink like these amazing people.

But I don't.

I ink like a wimp.








Ginga Yoshihiro Takahashi
Art and story 2012 by Nekonotaishou. Do not reproduce in part or in whole.
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:iconthewinterblood:
TheWinterBlood Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015
the last panel it just hit ya didn't weed?
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:iconforgoten-one:
Forgoten-One Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What no more. *blinks*
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:iconesthervdberg:
EsthervdBerg Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
wow is love this comic very much.
make more please.
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:icongingalegendsakura:
gingalegendsakura Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Artist
it's really good! I think it should be made into a manga!
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Thanks!

It's already a manga purely due to the style of comic and storytelling. If you mean published, well, I can't do that. There are copyright laws that mean I would get in trouble for using Yoshihiro Takahashi's characters.
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:icongingalegendsakura:
gingalegendsakura Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Artist
next page!!!!!
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:iconweedlover1:
weedlover1 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Uuuuu. Need more
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:iconwildanna12:
WildAnna12 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
next page.. please? 0-0
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:icondragonfire138:
Dragonfire138 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
I love the last part of this page with his going like that!
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:iconskyline-san:
Skyline-San Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wanna see the next page!!!! DX
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:icononioneyed:
OnionEyed Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
OOOOOH, shit

Awesome page > u <
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:iconkarinakaa:
KarinaKaa Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great story i Will look forward tomhed continue
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:iconkarinakaa:
KarinaKaa Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"To the"
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:icongingacreator:
Gingacreator Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
how long will it be until the next page?
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Filmographer
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:iconshinywhitewaters:
ShinyWhiteWaters Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pardon, but is that supposed to be Weed or Raiko in the last panel?
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Weed. Raiko played her part already and has left the story, those characters are not coming back.
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:iconshinywhitewaters:
ShinyWhiteWaters Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay.
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:iconsakurauchiha21:
SakuraUchiha21 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
LOVE IT!!!!! YOUR DRAWINGS ARE EXCELLENT!!!
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much! :)
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:iconsakurauchiha21:
SakuraUchiha21 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
not a problem! i loved it!
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:iconroxythewhitewolf:
RoxyTheWhiteWolf Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
plz add a new page
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Professional Filmographer
I will, hopefully sometime soon ^^;
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:iconroxythewhitewolf:
RoxyTheWhiteWolf Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Better the whole :community: is waiting for you to do so,if you don't :tombstone: for you D:<
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:icongingafallawayweed:
GingaFallAwayWeed Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist
Please quickly with the next page! i'm going CRAAAZYYYY
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:icongingafallawayweed:
GingaFallAwayWeed Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist
*in suspense
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:iconjeamesthewolf:
JeamesTheWolf Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just caught up on this story, really love it so far! ^^
I'm a huge Ginga fan, and I love fanfactions as much. <3
Love it, keep up the great story!

Btw, love Weed's face in the last panel. xD
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you :)
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:iconjeamesthewolf:
JeamesTheWolf Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. ^^
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:iconfrodse:
Frodse Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I like the way you ink ;-) You're great!
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you Frodse! :blushes:
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:iconfrodse:
Frodse Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
No prob ;D Keep up the good work! :D
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:iconnelli-chan:
Nelli-chan Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
I like your style :)
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you! :)
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:iconsperas:
Speras Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Very impressive comic so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much!
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:iconjeromesan5oo:
jeromesan5oo Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:the next page :c
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:iconditzykit:
DitzyKit Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Amazing! I just read the whole story in one sitting and I'm loving it so far. You're drawing and anatomy does Ginga justice, well done! Eagerly awaiting updates ̴
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:iconiftheworldwasbetter:
iftheworldwasbetter Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Dat face...
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:iconlittlenekoma:
LittleNekoma Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012   Digital Artist
I love the last panel. XD
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:iconnamelessokami:
NamelessOkami Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YESSS!!! I've been waiting for so long to see the next one!
This page is amazing.
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thank you!
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:iconnamelessokami:
NamelessOkami Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconfilippa-e:
Filippa-e Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice page! Ooooh wanna see what happens next!
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thank you! Hopefully I'll be able to put up the next page soon!
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:iconweisewoelfin:
weisewoelfin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I think your inking is neat C:
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:icontrollberserker:
Trollberserker Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm loving this derpy Weed on last panel xD
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:iconnekonotaishou:
nekonotaishou Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Ha ha, thanks X)
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:icondragonheartluver:
DragonHeartLuver Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Artist
seriously your to hard on yourself.... your inking it fine the way it is ... glad to see a new page finally missed this comic
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:iconwolf-star-studios:
wolf-star-studios Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i love the face in the last panel XD
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